We wrote a recount about our evacuation experience WALT add details to our writing and edit carefully.
Last Friday a tsunami happened I was scared and worried but then we got up the hill I was calm then I had some food. We went up the hill then we had to walk up the hill again I seen some gorse then I had some water. I had a bag of chips it was so good then an alarm went off again. We got to have a sausage and we got picked up. It was so cool seeing JJ.
Yay I see you achieved your WALT's in this blog. You must be working really hard on your editing skills. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWhat awesome pictures. That looks like a very safe and beautiful place to spend the day. I'm glad you were happy and felt safe x
I like your photo
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