We are learning to write a moment in time about our class assembly, 'The Great Reading Adventure'.
The butterflies went crazy in my tummy, then it was my time to shine! I was scared like some things in my tummy were diving. I was Maui's brother!! Then me and Maui and the brothers looked where the sun came up and my part was the sun is too powerful for us we can’t catch the sun. I like the part where the sun was running down the assembly and the three little Pigs. Too! the three bears were so funny. Then we did the Duffy song and at the end I felt marvellous.
Wow what an amazing piece of writing. Really makes me wish that I went looks like I missed out on a very cool assembly. I love how you used a metaphor to describe how your stomach was feeling when it was your turn to speak. I use to feel the exact same way when I was a kid. Sometimes even now as an adult. But just remember the more you do it the better you will be.
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