I am a Year 4 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Whaea Deb is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
We wrote a recount about our Tractor Trek experience. WALT add details to our writing and edit carefully.
Last Friday we had a Tractor Trek. I like the red and the green Tractor and I saw some people driving the tractor . I climbed into the green Tractor and the red Tractor and the Army Truck and I saw a John Deere and Hummers and Massey Ferguson.
Oh you are so lucky that you got to sit in all of those tractors. Did you tell Whaea Deb that we had to overtake most of them when we were driving home from Ngataki. The people driving the open cab tractors looked really cold.
Oh you are so lucky that you got to sit in all of those tractors. Did you tell Whaea Deb that we had to overtake most of them when we were driving home from Ngataki. The people driving the open cab tractors looked really cold.
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