Persuasive Texts - Should dogs be banned from the beach?

 WALT identify parts of a persuasive text!

Persuasive Writing Plan

Walt plan our persuasive writing on a Jam board.

At the Beach

On the 6 we went to the beach and it was fun and here were it start because it started on saturday on the 5 I think and that was when we had our bonfire. Same of are family came over to see the bonfire and then my mum call me,Kade,JJ,Julie and Alex to came in side when dad, Ash and Pids are out watching the fire and then we went to go back outside and I did some front flips when dad and his friends are watching me and ryan and ryan my dads friend did a back flip of the stant we have there then we went to sleep on the ground. Then we woke up late like at 7:33 and then at like 7:49 me and Kade had to make breakfast for them and get the spoons out for them and the bows for the coco pops and when we were getting ready to go to the beach and when we were at the beach it was so windel that I can not even sand dunes  and then we went to another spot to go fishing and when we were and the spot I slud down the sand dunes I four of it on the big gap and we got a lot of pipes and we got 3 snipper and 3 kahwai at east beach. 

Bonfire

 During lockdown we had a bonfire in a drum. When it got really hot some of the drum was turning red and it was so cool watching it. Dad said when the metal was hot we could try bend it but we did not. When it was burning me and kade were hitting the drum to make fireflies come out of our drum. There were so much that I could not see the fire. They were floating up high into the sky. I liked having aa bonfire it was fun.

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