Asttle Narrative Writing - A Loud Whispher

Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING
The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

WALT write a creative story

A long time ago there was a night called T dog was sent of to find a friend called Ash. He was good and smart and this is how he got lost so he went for a trip and he went. to this hunted house in a frost and he fell in to a trap in a huge hole in the ground and the night seen the wheel marks on the ground and then he seen foot prints on the ground. Then he heard a whisper and it was a ghost behind the night and he heard Ash scream for help and the night ran to Ash and save Ash and then they left and they lived happily ever after.
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Water - An Amazing Substance

24.11.21

We are using water to help us understand different scientific concepts.

On Friday we did some science and it was so fun because we had to cut up a ice cream container and get a plastic cup and then you full up the plastic cup with water and then put the cut up container on the cup so the water dose not tip out on to the ground and then the water well stay in they or if you probbley did it wrong so do it right and then you can probably teach someone else so do it right.

T Dogs Adventures

Once upon a time there was a Knight called T Dog. T Dog was a brave strong guy who was not scared of anyone. One day he was sent off to go and find a shiny amazing diamond for his boss. The diamond was protected by a dragon. He was a green dragon that was made out of metal he was called JJ. When T Dog got to the dragon they were on the 5th story of a haunted castle when they saw each other they started to fight because JJ the dragon knew that T Dog wanted to take the diamond. T Dogs sword snapped when it hit JJs hard tall, which was made out of metal. So he pulled out his magic sword, and when T Dog did a little flick the dragon got scared and let T Dog the knight pass. He got the diamond and gave it to his boss and they lived happily ever after.